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Horror story.
Author: velveeta jones    Date: 10/12/2008 12:54:17

Help me! How did this happen and what did I do to deserve this? And why oh why won't someone come to my rescue! The things that I've seen...... awful things.... horrifying atrocities....

Today I will tell my story.... while I can........for I know not what unspeakable things will be done to me next. Surely, I will be put back into my prison: a black box which closes with a loud THUD and where I remain, unable to move, my padded cell binding me to the wall, and the darkness, the frightening darkness...... Sorry, its hard not to cry, I'm sure you'll understand. No one should suffer these tortures.... no one.....

Let me pull myself together to tell you of my strange journey. I must be swift; as my prisoners could come at any minute.

I can remember as far back as being in the womb, my mother keeping me warm and at peace. Listening to generation after generation of people above me and out in the world. They are also at peace, at least most of the time. Then came the day when I was born against my will, taken away from my mother. The harsh sunlight, the screaming and pushing! Loud bangs in the morning sky – I would later learn was gunfire. As quickly as I saw these things, I was shoved back into semi-darkness. A sack of some sort.

Eventually, I could see; the land around me was bumping up and down violently as the scenery moved past me; all the while the men were screaming at each other.

Soon the horror began. From my sack, I could see the men that had captured me had come to a village of some sort. Much screaming and gunfire in the air. Young children are forced out of hiding places and made to put their arms on a stump – boys and girls who cannot even crawl yet – their arms viciously hacked off at the wrist or elbow and thrown back down to the ground. Mothers and fathers wail and plead with the men.

I cannot watch. Somehow, I know that I am the reason.

From my sack, I am put into a jail, along with millions of my kinsmen, and we are in total darkness. We hear muffled sounds occasionally – then a loud CLANK – then nothingness.

It is this way for many years.

Then one day: movement! Bright lights! I am taken by some men who talk sweetly and fondle me, turning me over and over. These men seem nice, they admire me, they seem to love me.

These men are not what they seem, however. They speak sweetly and hold me with love, but they soon put me under a very bright light and begin…… this is hard to talk about…… but these men are some sort of mad scientists! They, they, ……. alter me. They carve parts of me and shave me down to make some sort of shape that is pleasing to them. Once I have been altered, I am put into a thing made of gold that holds me into one position. My altered shape on display.

I told you this story would be horrifying!

After several long bouts of this surgery, I am again imprisoned into a box. Not long afterward another of my brothers is placed in this box. But wait, this… no it cannot be! He is in the exact same shape as me!! He has also been altered!! We are like….like….CLONES.

I pass out. I think that I might be dead. But death comes only to the lucky ones.

I am removed from my prison. The lights are bright. A woman is bending down and touching me. Her hands are ice cold. Her blonde hair and long face scare me. Certainly she is the leader of hell!

She picks up my brother and I see him go towards her face. Oh my God! I panic! I cannot run, cannot even move, this damn suffocating padding holds me to my prison wall! He is placed into her ear by a wire, left to dangle. The witch turns her head to admire my clone brother. Her mouth turns upwards to make a frightful gash in her face. I CANNOT LOOK.

THE WITCH HAS TURNED HER SIGHTS ON ME! SHE REACHES DOWN, HER ICEY HAND GRABS ME…..

I am awake. I must have passed out again. Thank God. But now I am moving, I realize to my terror that I too am attached to her. I move as she moves. The witch appears to have yellow colored wings around her neck, I assume this is the robe she wears for casting whatever evil spells she does. We must be in this place for some sort of sacrifice or other unspeakable acts of violence. People come up to her and offer their hand, they bend to her and put forth their face for some sort of anointing. I see that some of them also have my brothers and sisters attached to them. Some on the ears, some banded together as a chain gang.

The witch leads us towards an old man, his arms hang from him as if put there by accident. He bends towards her to speak. His breath is putrid; like hot bubbling acid. I cringe. Oddly, the witch also cringes, ever so slightly.

We are led to a stage. Hundreds of white faces holding signs and chanting “USA” greet the witch. I know that the end must be coming. I await my fate.

The witch says some words, which must be magic, for the crowd goes wild, they cheer and chant. The lights change and we move off of the stage.

I am not sure what happened, but I am – and my clone – are still alive, though still altered to this strange cut shape.

We will end back up in our prison. Won’t someone save us? Release us from this hell? Its hard to breathe in the box and the white padding is like a ….

No, someone comes….. please, please, send help. Can you call, can you, you…noooooooo…….

 

60 comments (Latest Comment: 10/13/2008 04:34:12 by trojanrabbit)
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Comment by m-hadley on 10/12/2008 14:16:24
Wow Velveeta,

My mind is reeling...is VJ describing the fate of purebreed puppies, or children in war-torn regions of the world, or have I not had enough coffee yet this morning and have missed a telling clue? I hope you will expand on this horror story later today - the images are so graphically drawn that they will surely stay with me all day. Thank you VJ for another superb piece of writing.

mfaye

:hug: & :peace:

Comment by velveeta jones on 10/12/2008 14:24:25
Faye, here's a clue:



http://cache.daylife.com/imageserve/0fyOf8ldc0dLi/610x.jpg






thanks to Aunt Azalea for the idea. Fever and writing deadline put a brain into "no can do" mode. But now I gotta butch up and go to work.

Comment by BobR on 10/12/2008 14:25:48
Blood diamonds and the blood-lust of Palin and her supporters.



Well done! :clap:

Comment by BobR on 10/12/2008 14:27:31
Quote by BobR:

Blood diamonds and the blood-lust of Palin and her supporters.



Well done! :clap:


ok, so it was Cindy, not Palin...





I was close!

Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 14:28:43
Whoah.

Comment by velveeta jones on 10/12/2008 14:32:53
Her outfit was an estimated $300,000.



:thud:



(I could live the rest of my life on that).

Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 14:34:44




From another angle... like the stands...

Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 14:36:00
Quote by velveeta jones:

Her outfit was an estimated $300,000.



:thud:



(I could live the rest of my life on that).


AHA!





Yessssssss....................................



It's a very scary story.

Comment by TriSec on 10/12/2008 14:51:00
Morning, comrades!



Regarding the hockey video, I once again thought I detected the "Obama" pulsebeat shortly after she was introduced.



And being an old "Gallery God" (Boston Garden, RIP), I also thought I heard the hockey chant "Ass-HOLE" at around the 1:55 mark...





Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 15:20:25
(psst... Keep watching our Bush Counter) in one hour and 40 minutes, that sucker will be double digits!

Comment by m-hadley on 10/12/2008 15:22:42
Quote by velveeta jones:

Faye, here's a clue:



http://cache.daylife.com/imageserve/0fyOf8ldc0dLi/610x.jpg






thanks to Aunt Azalea for the idea. Fever and writing deadline put a brain into "no can do" mode. But now I gotta butch up and go to work.




Heya Guys (& Gals - barf :P),

I guess I revealed my stoopidity and obtuseness this morning I thought that the evil one being described sounded vaguely familiar - but how do the bags and black boxes fit in? Is it just a metaphorical reference to the close-mindedness of the GOP? I also thought about those who have been rendered to undisclosed locations (ie, secret prisons). There is so much horror in the world that this story could be referencing various scenarios Thanks again, Velveeta. You are a very talented writer - ever considered turning pro? I'm just sayin'... :D

Cheers,

mfaye



:hug: & :peace:



:gobama:

Comment by livingonli on 10/12/2008 15:37:24
Good morning everyone.



At work, a number of people came into the control room to witness the spectacle and there was a pretty unanimous yes when she was booed at the Wachovia Center. The operator who was doing the Devils game in the next room was like she couldn't believe that they brought that fool out. And most of the producers at sight took a small giggle out of her getting booed. The producer at site was saying that the director got detained early by Secret Service when he was trying to get back to the production truck after going to use the bathroom. And Al Trautwig is an old fuddy dudd, since he had to go and chastise the crowd for booing her during our Hockey Night post-game show.



Thanks to the prep work and crap we had to do for Hockey Night, the train wreck that was doing the coordination and the fact that I wasn't able to start checking Sunday's log until 10:45 PM meant that I wasn't able to get out until 2:15 last night. So, I was pretty beat when I got home. At least tonight there is no live game and only MSG, NY is on so it should be a quieter night.

Comment by Mondobubba on 10/12/2008 16:09:25






Is it possible that she is even more annoying that Bush when it comes to the religion stuff?

Comment by BobR on 10/12/2008 16:11:16
Quote by m-hadley:





Heya Guys (& Gals - barf :P),

I guess I revealed my stoopidity and obtuseness this morning I thought that the evil one being described sounded vaguely familiar - but how do the bags and black boxes fit in? Is it just a metaphorical reference to the close-mindedness of the GOP? I also thought about those who have been rendered to undisclosed locations (ie, secret prisons). There is so much horror in the world that this story could be referencing various scenarios Thanks again, Velveeta. You are a very talented writer - ever considered turning pro? I'm just sayin'... :D

Cheers,

mfaye



:hug: & :peace:



:gobama:


I interpreted the black bags to be the velvet bags that unset diamonds would be carried in, and the boxes as the gift boxes in which jewelry is normally sold and given. Velveeta can correct me if I'm wrong.



Your metaphorical interpretation is interesting, though.

Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 16:27:37




Really great interview of 2 young woman from Alaska...



Smart insiteful ladies.

Comment by Random on 10/12/2008 16:37:52
Hi everybody



Comment by livingonli on 10/12/2008 16:55:03
Hi Random. How's your Sunday?

Comment by clintster on 10/12/2008 16:59:13
Woo-hoo! T-one hundred days and counting down!!!











Comment by Random on 10/12/2008 17:04:39
Quote by livingonli:

Hi Random. How's your Sunday?


Random is alright...he even did a second blog post o.o And enjoying my homework.

Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 17:25:47
Falcons already up 3-0...

Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 17:27:20
Heya Random!







Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 17:28:25
On behalf of the Atlanta Delegation, I would like to thank Boston for Matt Ryan.

Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 17:41:33
You know, maybe they weren't booing here after all...



Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 18:24:21
Comment by Mondobubba on 10/12/2008 18:45:22
Hi ho all. Back from the market. Why for the love of Pete does getting two kids out of car become a logistical undertaking on the scale of the Berlin Airlift?



I am off already, gotta go read more about what a crazy bastard Paul Nitze was!

Comment by trojanrabbit on 10/12/2008 19:55:16
Ugh. Starting my Sunday shift. At least everything is behaving itself so with a little luck I'll be outa here by midnight. I just have to figure out how I'm going to keep myself awake for the next 8 hours.

Comment by livingonli on 10/12/2008 19:55:55
And I thought my hours were bad.

Comment by trojanrabbit on 10/12/2008 20:07:03
Quote by livingonli:

And I thought my hours were bad.


The reason for all the hours is that we have to recalibrate the RF chamber annually which takes a couple of days, so to keep from falling WAY behind, we're pulling the long hours this weekend.



Since I'm the one doing the recalibrating, I get to come in when I want on Monday and Tuesday, so I don't see myself leaving for work until the SMS is over and I can finally DO IT LIVE! More very mindless work, but it needs to be done.



Rumor has it however that I might be doing the big OT next weekend too. That's sorta pushing it.



Comment by trojanrabbit on 10/12/2008 20:08:00
Oh, liv, my wife found the DVD remote. It got pushed under the sofa somehow.

Comment by livingonli on 10/12/2008 20:09:01
Quote by trojanrabbit:

Oh, liv, my wife found the DVD remote. It got pushed under the sofa somehow.


Ah, the sofa. Eater of remotes. But has it ever eaten socks?

Comment by trojanrabbit on 10/12/2008 20:10:34
Quote by livingonli:

Quote by trojanrabbit:

Oh, liv, my wife found the DVD remote. It got pushed under the sofa somehow.


Ah, the sofa. Eater of remotes. But has it ever eaten socks?




No, but sometimes if I put my hands under it, it may either scratch or bite me. ;)



Comment by BobR on 10/12/2008 20:21:39
HOLY CRAP!



The Falcons win in the very last second of the game!



WOW!!!

Comment by Mondobubba on 10/12/2008 21:55:05
Chilly in Denver today. Jones-Drew is wearing a high tech balaclava. Oh yeah, the Jags are winning! w00t!

Comment by Mondobubba on 10/12/2008 21:56:18
Quote by livingonli:

Quote by trojanrabbit:

Oh, liv, my wife found the DVD remote. It got pushed under the sofa somehow.


Ah, the sofa. Eater of remotes. But has it ever eaten socks?






Remotes, cellphones, socks. Small animals, annoying kids. :D

Comment by BobR on 10/12/2008 22:11:10
Quote by trojanrabbit:

Ugh. Starting my Sunday shift. At least everything is behaving itself so with a little luck I'll be outa here by midnight. I just have to figure out how I'm going to keep myself awake for the next 8 hours.


I used to have to work a rotating shift. I hated the 3rd, working midnight to 7:00 AM 5 days then Midnight to noon on Sat and Sun...



The upside was getting a whole week off as part of the rotation, but it was really hard readjusting the body clock every few weeks...



Comment by trojanrabbit on 10/12/2008 22:52:13
Quote by BobR:

Quote by trojanrabbit:

Ugh. Starting my Sunday shift. At least everything is behaving itself so with a little luck I'll be outa here by midnight. I just have to figure out how I'm going to keep myself awake for the next 8 hours.


I used to have to work a rotating shift. I hated the 3rd, working midnight to 7:00 AM 5 days then Midnight to noon on Sat and Sun...



The upside was getting a whole week off as part of the rotation, but it was really hard readjusting the body clock every few weeks...





I was originally hired here to do 3rd shift so I trained for a while on first. Thankfully 3rd shift never materialized and I was put on 2nd until last year when I got moved to 1st. 2nd didn't bother me much at all because the commute was much easier.

Comment by Raine on 10/12/2008 23:03:40
Comment by Mondobubba on 10/12/2008 23:18:20






Man, that Obama is an irresponsible commie, socialist, America hater! :rofl:

Comment by Mondobubba on 10/12/2008 23:19:44
If you want to put your blood pressure thru the roof and the HBOs, put on Real Time and listen to the idiocy that is Stephen Moore.

Comment by velveeta jones on 10/13/2008 00:04:52
Hello *cough* everybody.......... football? only football? *cough* :trys to reach remote: no baseball? Ug............fever....... ug..........



:thud:



Comment by Random on 10/13/2008 00:08:57
Quote by Mondobubba:







Man, that Obama is an irresponsible commie, socialist, America hater! :rofl:


Is is bad that i actually got through that entire story before reliezing it was a joke?

Comment by trojanrabbit on 10/13/2008 00:12:52
Quote by velveeta jones:

Hello *cough* everybody.......... football? only football? *cough* :trys to reach remote: no baseball? Ug............fever....... ug..........



:thud:





NLCS on Fox, right? They'll probably make you wait until the 4:15 football game is over. First pitch at 8:22 or thereabouts.



Comment by Mondobubba on 10/13/2008 01:02:01
Quote by Random:

Quote by Mondobubba:







Man, that Obama is an irresponsible commie, socialist, America hater! :rofl:


Is is bad that i actually got through that entire story before reliezing it was a joke?




Behold the power that is The Onion!

Comment by Random on 10/13/2008 01:09:15
Quote by Mondobubba:

Quote by Random:

Quote by Mondobubba:







Man, that Obama is an irresponsible commie, socialist, America hater! :rofl:


Is is bad that i actually got through that entire story before reliezing it was a joke?




Behold the power that is The Onion!


It sounds almost liek something McCAin would run.

Comment by livingonli on 10/13/2008 01:23:00
Well at least I was glad I didn't have to worry about recording The Simpsons and Family Guy tonight.

Comment by TriSec on 10/13/2008 01:25:33
Evening, folks!



The Allies succesfully took the Boon Lake airstrip from three squads of Germans this afternoon, although they did lose a tank to the 88s and an armored car to a passing Stuka.



A fine time was had by all.



And it's a blissfully sports-free evening in the TriSec household. It's travel day in the ALCS, and I'm not really *that* interested in the NLCS at the moment.



Yes, I'm aware of the other glaring omission. Wake me up if the Patriots are relevant this season.

Comment by trojanrabbit on 10/13/2008 01:43:12
Almost time to start the last side. 5 of 6 done. Might even get out of here before tomorrow. Then I just have to get myself home Kept myself awake so far by composing a rather risque (for me) email to the SMS. Hey, it's their fault, it's about Friday's Sex Stack....

Comment by trojanrabbit on 10/13/2008 01:45:09
Quote by TriSec:

Evening, folks!



The Allies succesfully took the Boon Lake airstrip from three squads of Germans this afternoon, although they did lose a tank to the 88s and an armored car to a passing Stuka.



A fine time was had by all.



And it's a blissfully sports-free evening in the TriSec household. It's travel day in the ALCS, and I'm not really *that* interested in the NLCS at the moment.



Yes, I'm aware of the other glaring omission. Wake me up if the Patriots are relevant this season.




They definitely aren't relevant tonight.

Comment by Mondobubba on 10/13/2008 02:29:59
Effing Drama! :rofl: